khalillondon's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Softly I Sing]

dont listen to wasabichaos

that asian needs to go die in a fire lol, once again, good job.

[Lejin - Why you mad Pt.3]

lejin youve done it again

im lovin it lol, ayo i forgot to tell you, if you want can you check out my song and give me some suggestions of improvement, cuz i need it since im still learning...im still young lol, but if you can check out some of my music, especially Whack MC's and House Party, they were made with me and a rap group im in, called Jersey Endless, and check out their myspace too.

http://www.myspace.com/ jerseyendless

[w/ Lejin : Keep Them Stressed]

phadedsoldier

wheres your music??? unless if you want to hate, you better have the raps and the beats to back it up.

anyways, this is good, rhymes are sick, lejin's stuff i real chill too keep it up.

[Lejin - Gae ChurchBoi]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

wow this is soooooo freakin funny, i and ive heard bad shit about mseemercury about him and how hes an ass, and after watchin it im guessin he likes it up the ass too lol, good job lejin.

Lejin responds:

If you think this was hilarious. Check his gae ass out in action DEEPTHROAT pero performance on FLASH!!!

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /420337

[Lejin - Damage Report(Facts)]

nice

the song is great, the lyrics, the rapping, everything pretty much. mine isnt as good but its a good start and if you want, you can check it out...but to give you a heads up, please dont say that i need better equipment, cuz i kno that already, cuz sometimes in the song my voice tends to fade in and out. lol, but if you get the chance, check out my songs and leave a good review and suggestions of improvement.

[Lejin - YeahYeah(KeyboardBang)]

good

it had a good flow to it, dissin isnt my thing but its really good otherwise

not to be nosy but who was this rap dissin??? jw

Lejin responds:

Oh no one of any importance lol.

[Nothing is Meant to Last]

this is good

i could use this for a song that im now workin on, but is it okay if i could collab wit this track??? get at me

Hyperion666 responds:

yeh collab with it but i want to hear n if its good i want the track if thats cool. but yeh go ahead do summin to it. u got my full permission to do so

[Silver Memory(featuring Hania)]

It's very good

i love how you set it up, and personally i love the song silver memory, but jus to point out that in the "ships arrive with the army of doom, all he hears is screaming that will end pretty soon" its kinda outta sync, and i jus fixed my song with the lyrics cuz one of them was out of sync, but i figured id let you know.

keep at it, cuz im expecting more lol.

Kaburorne responds:

Yeah, thanks for pointing that out. It got a bit tricky sorting out the tempos.

I really do want to make some more stuff, but I'm kind of having a block, so don't hold your breath :P

[~Mission Successful~ Loop]

this is good

i like the way the piano and drums come together in this one, but the what i personally do is i start out with the piano and later into the 4 measure i would put the drums in, but thats jus me.

but its good, keep at it.

kelwynshade responds:

I thought about it, and tried it, but in the end I came to the conclusion that a full loop would work better for just about anyone in their project. Thanks for the review.

[Hardcore Rap Beat]

since no one bothered into writing a comment...

ill start it off, this is good, the guitar has an angry feel to it, which is exactly what i need in my next song, if you would kindly let me use this for my next song and ill give you partial credit, well enough credit lol. get at me if you think so.